Ok, not bad... a batty implausible plot....but that is what I LOVE about AVNs.
Some criticism though. Consider them constructive.
First, SHOW do not TELL... the final scene of the game thus far with Helen, needs to be reworked as part of the next update. Truly. If it progresses from one certain... happening... in one way.... in one place.... to all the happenings mentioned in the descriptor text when it fades to black, before the end scene with Lexi and DD.... THEN YOU NEED SHOW THAT. It might hard, take time... but that should be a scene which you put that effort in to. All positions, all angles, SHOWN. It is not great for an AVN. If it was just a VN, without the A bit, as fundamental, you could get away with it. But in an AVN, where the A bit is front and centre, like this game... starting a scene... then fading and out and saying ...oh, and blah blah blah else happened too.. in a text note is not the best.
I appreciate that the devs first language might not be English...so there might be something lost in translation. However, in its current form, the Never Have I Ever scene feels REALLY juvenile. It is also in comprehensible that a 20 something year old woman, who obviously is a University graduate, because she a teacher, and who used to be a gang leader in her teens before turning her life around.. is a virgin. Likewise, whilst I know it is just a cover story... a 20 something model, high enough in the industry to be a cover girl on fashion mags also conveniently being a virgin too? I know a woman who was a maybe one or two rungs down from Paris/Milan/New York catwalk model... but high enough in the industry to be a Billboard model for companies like Calvin Klein and Ralph Lauren.. the BARE minimum level you have to be, be considered to be a cover girl.. and has always repeated the one thing I would not believe is the S*X, everyone was having it. It was worse than the most ridiculous porn at times, she claims. After parties, with Rock stars, billionaires, and politicians, competing with pop stars, socialites and nepo baby aristocrats. Those might not seem a bridge too far for suspension of disbelief by themselves.. those improbable virginities... but the juvenile Never Have I Ever game being their context? Yup. Just too corny and juvenile so really slaps that improbability in your face, and breaks any immersion.
DD/ Lexi: Ok I get the Dev has things to say between progression sometimes... many AVNs will do that, though honestly, it is NOT needed. But decide what she, DD, is there for. Is she part of the candy, or just a guide? Why make her some tease queen? It does not add anything to the game at all. And Lexi? Where the F did she even come from? Just some rando Pastel Doll shows up mid game? Ok. But. Um. Why? Unless the new girl next update is going to BE Lexi... it really is confusing. I am sorry, not trying to be harsh, but a slightly pointless double act that does not add anything to the game. When the game is finally finished, I would recommend going back, and removing all those scenes.. they can work helping day 0 players, just updating as new EPs release.. but will wholly unnecessary in the finished game, unless they actually DO something in the game.. or make good on their little sexy interludes, and put on a show, whilst something loads, or something. They became EXTREMELY annoying by the end of what we have so far.
Never the less... for what they are.. so far... the scenes are great, the girls are lovely, and varied, and I think there is one heck of a game potentially in the making. We have not really had many actual... full... s*x.. scenes... but I like what we got... though I would suggest the actual scenes be longer, and blocked/angled/'shot' more like actual adult film scenes... really proving an eyeful of the girls, there was a lot of POV, or close ups... and that is fine.. so long as there is also full shots, of the women, were we can really see them... doing their best. :P
I will give this 3/5 for NOW... which is actually HIGH for me, for an incomplete game. I suspect that will 11 out of 10, once this game is finished. I have high hopes.