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Merely a stray thought is all.

Presumedly, I take it the game is entirely developed from the ground up by 1 singular person, would I be right? That being said, I have my doubts, as to whether this assumption could be well-founded here, since this accomplishment would most certainly be difficult to ascertain by oneself after all.

Nevertheless, everything, from the ideas to art style, is deserving of commendation, and indeed would serve as a pleasurable catharsis for exhausted individuals coming back from both work and institution.

If it helps, I would like to proffer my humble, helping hand toward this project within order to allow for an extra dose of extravaganza—should ever there be a desire for such, of course.

As one of the many, I frankly love the concept, and would want to enhance that effectual experience to the utmost degree.

Sincerely, I know this will not be of much avail, but I am skeptical as to how I may offer my services—especially when my forte is austerely constricted within writing.

Toward whoever peruses, have an effulgent day!

Written by,

Tenebres, the aspiring author.

Chain Games82 days ago(+1)

You are correct, I work on this completely alone in whatever free time I can find. While I appreciate the kind words, writing is not an aspect of this game that I need help with. If anything, I need a digital artist, but I doubt there's anyone willing to work for next to nothing or literally nothing.

Tenebres Itomori82 days ago(-2)

Well said, indeed.

Albeit I would be more than delighted to be of assistance however I could, unfortunately digital artistry happens to be one of my poor-grown traits, I am afraid to say. Furthermore, you make a very pivotal point, owing to the fact erotica usually relies heavily upon the utilization of already-drawn visuals.

Upon the other hand, writing would solely enable imagination and imagination alone, sadly. Whilst self-visualization is a niche of itself, particpants may discover it to be quite arduous—particularly for those whom are novices, and are attempting to release their inner emotions.

Candidly, you have my deepest appreciation for acknowledging this, and I wishfully pray you find the right person for the key role you are within requirement of.

May all enterprises come toward fruition,

Tenebres, the curious petal.

PS: As someone who is within need of some public exposure (referring toward myself) , may I inquire for your personal opinion within accordance with my writing style? I seek this conjecture, for I am not too familiar with how to entertain people—especially truthful through the means of literature. Been orchestrating to write novels, I keep coming to this hard, brick wall of lacking ideas; therefore, I have been very reluctant, as to whether I would want to initiate it all by my lonesome. I must confess, having a reliable partner would be incredible.

Chain Games81 days ago(+1)

If you really want my personal opinion, if you're not using it I mean no offense, but the paragraphs you've written come off as AI generated. The word choice, structure and punctuation have all of the signs. If you're not using AI, you need to tweak your style, especially if you're going to be writing character dialogue.

Tenebres Itomori80 days ago(-3)

Oho, my word!

As far as I am understanding the circumstance, I perceive this as both a compliment, and a bit of an insult (I do not really mean within a harsh way; just acknowlegement). Not to toot my horn, but I would proudly proclaim my writing style exceeds sophistication than that of artificial intelligence!

Frankly speaking, this is not the first I have come across someone labelling my writing prowess as AI generated. Seriously, I have detached myself so much from caring about others felt toward my actions to the point where I observe this as a commonplace thing—a normal mannerism of conduct.

With regard toward the paragraphs, I must agree naturally, as dialogues function differently. However, this would not mean I am as stubborn as I may radiate! As proficiency over writing styles goes, I would say it would not be much of an ordeal, really.

Above all else, my true weakness lies within idea generation, since this is more difficult, as it contradicts most of my principles as a healthy human being.

Before I forget, I will address this manner of writing, because I could sense you are a little interested within it. Outspokenly, I am merely someone who happens to find speech and writing expressions to be of fascination; a psuedo-linguist, if you will. Personally, my ambition as a writer and an editor would be to aggrandize the triviality, or to strike deep, impressive impressions upon readers of all genders!

Ever there be 1 terminology to describe, the noun 'formality' would be absolute well-chosen!

Apologies toward dragging you here this long, but fret not, for I will take my departure soon enough. Perhaps, these few interactions of ours could serve to be of helpfulness toward your project within some ways, I hope.

May there be as many opportunties as there are stars within galaxies,

Tenebres, the departing crepuscule.

tc44319 days ago

respectfully, using poncy language isn't what makes a good author. vivid description, realistic dialogue and creative direction do.

not saying that's all your good a cause all i have to go on is these messages. but it seems that way

Tenebres Itomori19 days ago(-1)

A lovely hello to you, Tc443!

Thank you for your observation & careful judgment, as I esteem your remark to be encouraging to some degree. Whilst taking everything at face value is instinctively preferential, they say (or 'asseverate' if I ever would like to be overly pompous within diction, aha): the more dedicated the vocabulary reservoir is, the more plausibly one would be able to perceive more shades of meanings! Therefore, to amass such an accumulation of extravagant & polysyllabic terminlogies, one would & must have experienced lots of stories & readings throughout their lifetime; my outline is I do have the necessities toward painting a verbally interesting exemplum.

Truth be told, the matter of an environment—whereby I would be of great potential—lays dormant & seemingly unreachable. Futhermore, writing alone would never suffice, since it would be rather narrow for job opportunties of well-paying salaries; hence I must maintain momentum of personal & professional development. You know, life is incredibly exhilarating, for whithersoever you have things to bolster upon, would you not agree?

Well then, my appreciation for your assimilation of information & for your precious caring of my thread-posting.

May winter ushers nothing but promising future,

Tenebres Itomori.

P.S.: Owing toward the fact I am here, I may as well advertise a little bit. For your information, would you fancy indulging within a visual novel prototype of mine labelled 'Isshoni: Our Dolorous Mondays'? As the odds would have it, I doubt something as my first & foremost project would ever receive proper recognition, but I am perfectly fine with getting what could be tossed aside.

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