Gathering the town - Lots going on. The composition is very exciting! Sounds like some of these might be free orchestral instruments, which are hard to get under control so I understandthe comments mentioning balance and mixing. One thing I noticed is that the level of an instrument was ok but they had really high attack, especially strings. I really like all the space you've left, all the ideas can breathe and are very impactful.
Where people used to be - There's some really complex rhythms in the piano that are really exciting when you hear them against the other instruments but it's a little confusing to the listener when it's isolated at the beginning. I really like the left hand piano writing towards the end, reminds me of the piano in breath of the wild, like the horse riding music.