You’ve hit the nail on its head.
Both the intro (Birding Grounds) and A rainy stroll had their problems.
The intro was originally planed for a different idea I had but I didn’t want to scrap it fully so it got mangled into what it is now. Which might haven’t been the best choice.
Since In Flow took me quite a while and rethinking my game idea, I had to somewhat rush a rainy stroll, also because I was heading to vacation a few days after. So, I agree with most of what you said and think that there is room for improvement.
But overall I’m glad that you liked it and thank you for your critique.