Love the story concept. Every track fits pretty well to your descriptions, and the ferris wheel scene is cute. "Beach Games" sounds like it would be a really obnoxious minigame lol. The guitar seems a little off in this track to me, maybe it's a little loud in one ear?
The changes between Boardwalk Halo and Twilight's Farewell are interesting and well-designed. The soundtrack and story as a whole was a fun little ride to go on that I thoroughly enjoyed. Nice work!