Your OST to me sounds like someone brought Tchaikovsky back from the dead, explained to him this story idea, handed him a synthesizer and said "ok, get to it!" (This is a compliment, I liked your soundtrack)
More importantly, I was heavily distracted by the first sentence of your story. Something about the way it was written, like it was this grandiose, cinematic opening describing the emotions of this woman, then you completely glazed over the fact that this dude just went on The Odyssey™ after surviving an attempted murder.
Paraphrased: "The curtain draws as a lone woman stands out by the pier, reflecting on the events that led to her attempted murder of her husband. Aside from the spite and turmoil in her heart, she carries with her only a lone cigarette. She anxiously watches the sea; hoping he never returns. ANYWAY, she botched it - he's fine and out doing cool shit. Her dumbass goes to jail. The end." lmao