While the melody is nice, this song is kinda repetitive.
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I'll have to second this, as I think some breaks from the main melody would help :| Stopping the main instrument from playing for 4 bars or so I think would help highlight the supporting instruments and let the background wind be heard better, helping set the atmosphere better. Overall though, good sound choice and mixing them together (better than I've ever done XD), and good melody :D