I'll have to second this, as I think some breaks from the main melody would help :| Stopping the main instrument from playing for 4 bars or so I think would help highlight the supporting instruments and let the background wind be heard better, helping set the atmosphere better. Overall though, good sound choice and mixing them together (better than I've ever done XD), and good melody :D
Nice song! In my opinion, it doesn't sound like the vibe of a song I'd hear at a fishing spot, as it sounds like a build-up of sorts that's generating some dramatic tension :\ However, the instruments play well with each other and the melodies sound great! :D The song's well put together. Hope to hear more songs from you in other jams!
I quickly made this on my keyboard, and I forgot all the velocities would be the same :| If i was smart, i would'a redone them all on my midi for a better feel. Buuuuuut... here we are :P
This was so outta left field from what I was expecting, but it was AWESOME. Sounds like the song that'd go in a retro poly game to show how hard the dark forces triumphed over good in the backstory. Great job with the build up!
Hi there! Can't see your song for download. You might need to (un)check a box somewhere in the "edit soundtrack" area to 'allow others to download your song'. Can't remember exactly where :| Had this problem in my last jam, and hope it'll be the solution for you as well :)
it kinda turned into a lullaby mid-way through, so i just went with it XD i knew the connection was kinda weak, but I was trying to challenge making anything for the first time in almost two years. I'm pretty bad at seeing a lot of my work objectively, so I'm glad to hear you think I'm more than just a beginner <3 Mixing and mastering is still my Achilles Heel, and that's gonna take a loooooooooooootta time to work on (X~X) Thanks for leaving a comment, and good work on you song as well! :D
I really liked the beginning for the song and the instruments you added for the build up (around 1:30)! It did get hard for me to listen to once a lot of instruments were layered one over the other, felt like too much happening at once.
