ahh thanks for the thorough review!!! im really glad that my chord progressions and use of timbre shined through, my style is a lil unconventional and sometimes doesnt land well and im glad i was successful this time:]
as i said in a previous comment, i agree with the sea ambience comment... i didnt notice it until it was pointed out bc im so used to hearing those exact noises irl at length and know how to tune them out, And mixing is difficult in general in beepbox and due to my hearing issues . but im glad to hear the sea ambience was the main issue - i used to struggle with balance between the lower end and higher end and im glad that wasnt the case this time!
thanks so much!!! im glad u enjoyed listening:DDD