Nice work! Here are a few notes:
- The title screen is full of charm, the loop is a bit choppy but I love the art and how it looks. The start button took a few tries to get working, though.
- The controls are a bit hard to see on the screen, I'd recommend upping the contrast and also making itmore clear that you can glide.
- The music is hilarious!
- The sounds you can make are also hilarious, and I love the core concept and how your voice and your need to glide interact. Really fun concept.
- That said, I think gliding is really awkward because of how long it takes to get going - I'd recommend having the player start to glide earlier in their fall.
- The art is all pleasing, even if Poly looks a bit out of place - I LOVE the thumbnail you made, though, it's funny and absolutely full of character.
- It wasn't immediately obvious to me that each key was one use only - perhaps color each key and key door a different color, or play a sound to note that the player is out of keys?
- I unfortunately kept getting stuck after running into walls while gliding around (always while going left for whatever reason), which kept me from getting very far - I could still make sounds, but I wouldn't rise into the air.
Because I got stuck and because the process of moving up to glide down was a bit tedious, I didn't get far, but I think you have a solid start here!