i always look forward to your submissions on every jam, you always make bangers! It's impressive that you did this on an old computer honestly, i would have probably ragequit if that happened to me ngl 😭
i think my favorite track is moonlit fields, it's a banger, really liked the choice of synths for that one, also this goes for Goodbye, Sun as well but i especially like the acoustic guitars on the sides and how they drive the rhythm of the song if that makes sense (idk if that's the right term for it) , also I love the way Moonlit Fields is mixed though i feel like it's just a LITTLE BIT quieter than the other tracks but that's honestly not a big issue, STARWEAVER is also a banger too i always love intense drums like that! the bass is also super good i love it! of course as the other comment said maybe some things could be mixed differently (if it helps at all personally i'd turn the crash down a little but dont take my word for it as im not very good at mixing) but honestly it's really good for having been made in just 3 hours, plus im guessing you hadai similar situation to mine bc i myself rushed my last track a bit since i was getting tired 😭
also to be VERY honest i wasn't able to understand the full story that well but probably because i have the worst reading comprehension of all time xD sorry about that, but still i feel like every individual track fits their descriptions very well! and STARWEAVER sounds like a reallyh cool song for a final boss bullet hell section against a super powerful cosmic entity!!
as a side note the cover art is SO pretty i wish i could make stuff like that in 40 minutes! amazing stuff as always and hope to see you again next jam :D