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Right away, the photographs and layout caught my eye, and I love the way you did it all. Including references to the photos you used right on the images is amazing, and your layout is so clean despite all the imagery!!! And the photos pair so well with the theme and words of your game.

I LOVE the theme of this. You really capture the setup of the sponsor/company, the brand ambassador, and the customer. I love that this makes fun of all three sides so effectively, and really points out how ridiculous all of this is. I felt agony from some of these because of how I’ve felt on the receiving end of them, both as an employee and as a customer, you really nailed them 🤣 

I found the text a little hard to read on my computer for a couple of the talking points, but I feel like that probably wouldn’t have been as bad if I printed it. And I noticed one typo on Nightblade (talking points): “Listen champ, now that renegotiated the savings” should probably have the word “we” or something before “renegotiated.” 

But those two things are INCREDIBLY minor issues, and what you made here is absolutely fantastic, SUPER fitting of the theme, and hysterical. 

I honestly don’t have a lot to say here because it’s so well pulled off, and the game is hysterical and sooooooo fitting… I definitely do appreciate the included Talking Point and Pain Point “cards” though, as I assumed people would be making these up themselves as I was reading the rules, but you did all of the work!

- ✨Beth

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Thanks for letting me know about the text. As much as I like style, I think legibility and accessibility are just as, if not more important. If I make another go at this, I'll try to balance the visuals with more clarity. 

I really hope you do, I love what you've made here! :D

- ✨Beth