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I felt that bass melody in Echoes of the Shrine is a bit too busy. You have a lot of other things, it kinda distracts from a magnificent shamisen and percussion.

Also I think in some tracks the shamisen or koto was a bit too loud. For example in Hozuki Village I’d lower both koto and flute a bit

I think you’ll benefit from not making the busy rhytms as long, for example in shattered silence shamisen was a bit overwhelming

Overall your submission brought me a lot of joy, I love shamisen and koto experiments :D

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Honestly thank you for the criticism, I agree that some instruments were a bit much sometimes. 

This was my very first time entering a jam like this and everything I thought I would do went out the window when the theme was announced.

I'm planning on doing more in the future and will 100% work more on making things a little easier to understand but it was a lot of fun. 

Hopefully I'll use some Japanese instruments again next time, or in future projects.