Nice little tale with good writing!
Left me wanting for more, though :)
You said it was your first time using Twine? How was it? Can we expect more interactive fiction from you? <3
Yes, I used twine because of the less time.
Honestly, while using Twine I realised that it is actually pretty interesting and can be expanded further.
I am thinking DnD-like stuff here, but no promises XD