I was excited to play this one! Here's some feedback I had:
Art-wise, this game is very tight! I see the inspiration and reference to Madoka immediately, but with your own modern uniqueness so kudos to that!! <3
Upon starting the game, I didn't know exactly what to do, but quickly began reading the things I was clicking on screen. I think a tutorial or even just a brief intro image/note that the game is currently a point n click/ visual novel will help the player know how to interact with the game when it begins.
I often times didn't know what to click on to progress the narrative, and accidentally had to restart dialogue multiple times before progressing.
Very pretty, detailed dialogue and language. Very ethereal and appealing to the senses. Pairs well with this art style~
For what seems to be a solo project, this is looking good so far, and I'm interested to see how it progresses. Rooting for you!