I like the orchestration and the themes and composition work you're doing, the leitmotif you occasionally echo in is a really good touch! The critique I'll offer is the the mix levels and reverb for your instruments, and the instrument choices, can be a little strange at times. Some of them really fill up the mix and it makes it difficult to ascertain other instruments while one is playing, but again that'll come with more time and more stuff made. I can't deny the story blurb and the accompanying music is very well arranged. Good work my dude!
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thank you for the feedback, nova !! this was all made in 4 days so i kinda rushed it (cause i js wanna pass this early LMAO) and i just mashed every melody that i acn think of for the story and so its bad but i slept so i could reset my brain and remove the ugly sounding melodies. DO YOU GET IT but yeah im glad you enjoyed my work !! i appreciate it so much.