Your piece shows a thoughtful combination of strings, piano, and foley.
The structure is clear and easy to follow, and it’s clear you’re exploring interesting ideas. At the same time, some sections feel a bit straightforward, and there’s room to experiment further with dynamics, layering, or thematic development and create a more vivid soundscape. Notes can be struck a little out of sync to add a more human feel, for example.
And by the way, last track is bonkers ! it is like the restrain you showed previously suddenly vanishes and all hell breaks loose.