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Dear Diary - Very uplifting first track, Would love to know how you did the bass!

City girl - Great funky tune, sounds like a gen 4 pokemon city theme! 

You bring me joy - Brought me joy!

Come with me - Modulations were very exciting! Particularly like the G# minor chords!

Uncontrollable friction - Some friction between the synth pad and violins, a chord really stood out and was very exciting but i think some of the notes should be looked over again  as i think it could be dissonant in a more correct way perhaps? It's subtle so might just be me. Think it's a minor 9th between an E and F that's too grating for my ears (with the Eb in the bass too)

Love lost - Some beautiful chords, I like the 7/1 slash chords. The second chord is really beautiful! C13#11? Great tension and resolution work. 

That one summer night - Really love track, nice vocals!

Great piano arranging, would love your feedback on my own piano writing as I'm not much of a pianist!

Thank you so much for making it, was really fun to listen!

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oh, for the Dear Diary bass i just used an amplified sine wave with an effect chain to make it stand out more.

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Thank you kindly, the detailed review is very very appreciated! I'll leave it to @snugglybunne to explain about the bass writing as much of the more detailed instrumental arrangement is hers.

For my part, I can respond re: piano since I played that stuff live: I find the insertion of chord extensions as being incidental to whatever the basic chord is, so I don't think twice about it until someone points it out. I'll be sure to give yours a good listen on my return home, especially from a pianist's lens.