yeah u are kinda right. i always mess up when i want to add up a lot of things and not worrying how does it sound. i also noticed bgwf sounds a little dissonant, i kinda messed up on there. for being my first time i gotta admit, i'm very ashamed of what i posted. but anyways, there's no going back i guess. btw your soundtrack was real good!!!
don’t get discouraged! Many of the issues I had can be cleared up through artistic intent. Like the shop theme for example. If you told me that it has no release to make it feel more like a shopping center speaker sound system was playing it, then I would believe you and it would become an artistic choice that I appreciate more.
I value that kind of stuff a lot. Many comments I leave on entries is the same thing of asking for more details of why people chose to do what they did in the music.