I'm making this sound like way more of a big deal than it actually is. Sorry.
No no!! Don't apologize. Ultimately, this is about becoming a better writer and learning/researching techniques that allow me to convey things properly through story telling. It's not like I have a team of devs I can bounce this stuff off of.
I can't disagree with anything you're saying, to be honest. All of the feedback has been tabled and I've set aside a big chunk of time to work on this. You've been a huge help. Thank you!