Cicadas - Cool lofi sound, I like the idea of writing around the sound of an animal!
Rolling thunder - Similar core idea, has the same lofi swing feel. Some of the chord choices seemed a little underdeveloped. There was one chord change that was really nice (went to a B minor 9, 2:00) but it came one chord too late in my opinionand the chord before had a nasty minor 9th interval that didn't sound right to me. On the rhythmic swing feel, try to push the swung beats (off beats) back a little, feels alot more satisfying in my opinion. My go to artist for this kind of stuff is Kiefer, hope you check them out!
nights like this - cool progression, I think the bass line moving ahead of the chord change makes it a bit confusing to listen to, it's super obvious when the beat kicks in what's going on but the intro fealt a little wonky because of it. I think what I would have done is move the bass note that leads ahead of the chord change down so it anticipates the change harmonicaly as well as rythmically.
a midnight goddbye - very nice soundscape, my main critics are again composition related ( I hope that's what you're looking for based on your description!) There's a note that sticks out in the piano, it's and F and it clashes with alot of the chords. Doesn't make it wrong per say but I'd consider messing around with that note to see if you definately want it over every chord.
I had alot of fun checking out your soundtrack, I think I could definately learn some things about production from you, especially relating to those lofi tape effects, because I do like throwing those kind of moments into my own music!