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Admittedly I didn't notice this was a Daycare Attendant story when I first downloaded it, I just saw yandere and siren then immediately clicked download, but that was a pleasant bonus. And I've got to say the presentation here is gorgeous! Apart from the absolutely beautiful character designs (I'm a sucker for mermaids/sirens in general and these are some of the most gorgeous characters I've ever seen) but the actual layout design from the font choices to the backgrounds to the save screen are all brilliant. You put so much work into the little details and I really appreciate seeing that. Now I don't know if it was a bug with my download or if there isn't any music at all with this current demo but the lack of sound was really noticeable, hoping there will be some in future updates. 

I like the story so far, the implication that the MC has been through this scenario before and the lost memories is an interesting hook, and Sun is definitely compelling in how he addresses the MC (I actually love how he acts in the creepy route, we don't get enough creepy Sun stuff). Haven't seen much of Moon yet but I'm very curious to see how he acts, especially considering what happens when you close the game. However one critique I do have is that the writing for the MC on the 'flirty route' (for lack of a better term) does come across as a bit too silly. It really took me out of it and I feel like it could have been toned down to let the MC show attraction to Sun and progress that way without feeling so out of place. Maybe nobody else will have issue with that or maybe it's a translation issue but that was the one thing that really broke my immersion. 

Overall there's a lot of potential here and I like what I'm seeing. Will definitely be keeping an eye out to see how this develops. 

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Okay, first of all, thanks for the play! And hey, I gratefully take my hat off to you and your comments

1. there was no problem with the windows version of the music, there was indeed a problem with the android version of the music, which has now been urgently fixed, thanks for your feedback! It means a lot to me!

2. about the plot, forgive me if I can't reveal too much, but the plot is really set up now for a reason .... .moon's personal story line is in the second half of the story ..... (VERY MUCH!!! Gosh, you were his first first love, he's your asshole stalker, and I'm teaching him to learn how to flirt! But he just can't learn!

 (wild fish!)

(moon: staring at you and wagging his tail)

3. and the "silly route" is there for a reason, LMAO, this route is very important to sun himself, he is desperate for "all out" love from you, this route you are purely submissive and infatuated with sun. You gained his love, and in turn, lost your soul. ....... Just like Odyssey, imprisoned on the island by Calypso. 

The options in the prologue still have a choice ....... But once you choose to become addicted, it's also hard to escape, which is the tragedy of this story XD 

I know there's very little that can be conveyed in the prologue, but I can't believe I've already written 10k+ words? I'm surprised too, so I had to post it as well to avoid me getting too tangled up in the plot and revising upside down

4. I apologize about the translation issue, I translated it personally, a lot of the subcultural terms added in the silly route are in fact subcultural terms in the Chinese community, I translated it as close as I could to the preferences of native English speakers, so please feel free to leave me a comment if you think I've got any translations that aren't spot on! Thank you very much! I'll revise it as soon as I can!

Thanks again for writing so many comments for this silly au! I may not have much talent when it comes to scripts, but I'm happy to hear you say you like their design, it gives me a huge boost!