I like the art style and atmosphere, good job! But I think there are many parts that could be improved more.
The controls and camera movement are a bit janky. The interactable objects, such as the sticks used in level 2, tend to blend in with the background, making them hard to see. The texts are hard to read and they sometime overflow out of their containers. And the combat is not engaging. If those problems are fixed I think it would be a great game :D