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There is two typos when the mc goes running with Maeve. "Nah, I'm just early. Where's your weighted west?" west should be vest. after the run Mel says "Or she's been doing this a lot longer thank you and showing off a little. You'll get there." thank should be than. Overall it seems a little rough around the edges but might be an interesting story later. Trouser snake made me laugh a bit and the only thing I had nagging me throughout the story was if the mc's goal was to become a courier why didn't he get in better shape.

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Thanks! Typos were fixed.