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This story's dialogue, humor, and art were wonderful. I think this could really evolve into something fantastic with revisions around driving conflict, trimming exposition, and ensuring the integrity of the worldbuilding remains intact. 

Great job to the creator! And here's my video review: 

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Thanks for your review and the video! Was really fun watching. I guess I have to state a few things more than once at the beginning to make sure that more casual readers get them, since this left you a few times in unnecessary confusion about the world building. :D I also need to make clear that the "recap" is a recap of the prequel game ("Sweet Science") which explains why it feel like a summary: it is a summary!