This is a fantastic VN: Creative and compelling storytelling, well-paced and efficient writing, clever and resourceful use of assets, you name it~ I loved all of the music and night drive photos, and I was particularly struck by how the motifs of Dahlia's music and face blindness alike came full-circle thematically with what we end up learning about Ivy, heheheh~ Not to mention what ELSE we learn about Ivy and her interest in Dahlia...
Marvelous work~ Color me very impressed—doubly so considering that this is the first game you've ever made!