You've come up with a great theme interpretation of doing jam as a risk and forgeting about everything else. However, it is too punishing for player. With not full control of a character you are to understand the task (not easy already) while jogling between people. Too hard
But the graphics... oh boy I knew something FrEnCh was going on from the very first view of the page! Elegant, dense, vivid and expressive. Probably that is the little of praise I got to deliver to your art vision. Keep it up, improve engagement and make an easier game. And that will be legendary.