Hey this stuff is insanely cool and im thinking of allowing a couple of my players the chance to use some of the things within here.
However i did notice that there were a few spelling mistakes and what i think are missing segments of the book. (For Example: In the butcher's domain "The house that eats its young" the section that says what agenda item the exorcists gain if they fail their psyche check is missing)
If i am mistaken in any of this feel free to ignore this little segment but otherwise i think this is worth noting down for a future revision.
Otherwise, again this stuff is really cool and i love it.
10/10, You should be proud.
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Hi Flying Crow! Thank you for downloading and enjoying my content! As someone who is a 1 person team there is definitely some typos/errors I missed upon my first edition here, which is why I thoroughly appreciate feedback like yours. I've been noting what people tell me and rest assured the next version will be a bit more polished. (For that specific example I need to remove the word "and" after the statement and bold the phrase "severely hurt someone close to you".)
I hope that the additions you include at your table provide alot of fun and cool narratives for you all to enjoy!!