Really fun concept, I liked how polished the game was ! The game has little touch everywhere wow really amazing! The character controller is really fun to play and the dialogue is so smooth I like it.
If I could suggest an improvement, maybe falling into the void is a little too punitive I think. And also make a quick revive cause having to go through the fade animations and the dialogue everytime you die is a little annoying.
Overall, great job — impressive work for such a short time!
I also joined the Brackeys Jam with my team, we made a roguelike about delivering a cookie to the king. If you feel like trying it out, go check it out. I’d love to hear your thoughts too!