Thanks for your comment! I'm very happy to hear that you enjoyed the story and the characters :3
I am indeed not a native speaker, I tried to make sure it didn't sound jarring at any point (and got quite stressed because of it) but, if you got any specific feedback you would like to share, you can always send it to my bluesky DMs (linked in the bio) or discord (cadamojoka). I will try to slowly patch it up and make it sound as fluid as possible!