So, this was a very interesting one! The cast seems cute, and you've create a curious little world. One that left me with a lot of questions that I'll be interested in seeing answers for as y'all release more. The origins of the mushroom, whether humans exist in this world, and ultimately how the characters end up all developing. Dzanno's relationship with a certain shark especially.
There were a couple times in the novel I was a little confused, mostly due to the dialogue or description being a little awkward. I assume that mostly comes from you not being native English speakers. But that'd be an easy fix as some polish gets put into the game. Can't wait to see where we go next for chapter 2!