The idea of the game is really fun, and all the sketches and drawings on the sheets look great! One thing to look at is the hitboxes: I recommend making the deadly ones significantly smaller, because sometimes it feels like you die without touching them, even though you actually did.
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Actively working on improving the hitboxes - essentially making the player's hitbox tighter and, as you said, making the ones most could die on easily a bit more forgiving. So expect the next version to be more playable in that respect
And thanks for the comment and the valuable feedback! Glad you enjoyed my game 💯
Edit: Hope the hitboxes are no longer a problem, let me know if they still are though, I'll get a better fix working