Great work! The story is engaging, with a unique premise to it. I appreciated the visual style, and found that the sound design struck a perfect balance between adding to the scenes noticeably, without being distracting. I love the idea of adding/expanding on the experience based on how many times it's been played.
My only note is that it wasn't very clear to me when the text stopped for the first time that we had to interact with the world to keep going. Otherwise, it's a brilliant game that this team should be proud of.