Woah, the art is really delightful!
One thing I noticed is that you’re mostly still using Ren’Py’s default UI . While it’s functional, it doesn’t really showcase the quality of your game as much as it could.
I specialize in designing custom UI for visual novels and narrative games, with a focus on making the interface feel integrated with the game’s style. A custom UI can really highlight your art, strengthen immersion, and give your release a more distinctive, polished feel. Just a little heads up and if you need distinct UI for this remake or new project, I'd be glad to help ^^
You can see my portfolio on:
https://vgen.co/ratslayer/service/visual-novel-ui/ef5acdac-0af9-4979-9490-a1043d0ce550