While I do like the instrument choices, I think the composition is way too random : the main lead seem to be in a totally different tempo than the rest of the composition, and the whole chord progression lacks a direction.
The sound design is really aggressive both in timbre and volume, really lacks reverb for a track that's supposed to be ambient.
I did lack the section when the drums came in. Really meshed well with your ecological disaster scenario !
Just work on making your track more coherent, work on smoother transitions and I'm sure the track could be amazing ! Much support
PS : I hate soundcloud autoplay. Transitioning from an ambient track at full volume to Rage Against the Machine was not good for my ear drums lmfao