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Really clean submission ! It's well mixed, easy to listen, and the guitar sounds are well executed ! I'm a sucker for dual guitar arpeggios like these. 

I have two things to say however : first the drums seem way too simple for me, and I know simplicity is better than having too much stuff but it sounds like you're being very timid with them. Not only there should be something other than snare and drum, but it being the exact same throughout the whole submission really hurts the listenability of it. Bringing some change as well as additional percussion as ear candy would be relevant.

Second, the progression. The submission sounds roughly the same and it really lacks that progression, that tension building that leads to a climax (or a suspended ending), it's an important element even in fully ambient tracks.

That said, I enjoyed your submission a lot. I especially appreciate the use of irl guitar and bass, and I encourage you to keep building your skills on these instruments and using them for your music. Great work !

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Thanks for the reply! Glad you liked it.

There's actually only one guitar in here. I'm not sure if you're referring to the 5th up effect, that's just coming from the Whammy. But it's only one guitar.

And yeah I could have 100% made it more complex, I do agree with that. But I just liked the simplicity of this one and kept it that way instead of messing with it further. I also had to do it on the last day, so I had to get it done quickly ;P If there is another one of these I'll try to give myself a couple of days so I can make one that's a bit more involved.