while i respect that you do indeed have a good "story" here, i'm not certain you understand that, like with most movie scripts, the visuals are 90% of what is good about the story.
and while you do point out that its not going to be a "harem smut" story in future, i just have to ask you one thing - in a medium that is highly saturated with quality works (movies), would anyone watch the Spiderman movie, if the protagonist had no superpowers?
it would indeed be a different story entirely, and have no where near the same impact and no longer be an action movie, and would just blend into the hundreds if not thousands of other drama movies out there.
what made Evermore great was not the fact it was just a "good story", but the fact that it was an "AVN with a good story" in a small pond of other AVNs with mostly mediocre stories..
and i get it, you cant brag to your mates or impress girls by telling them you are an 'adult fiction writer' (particularly if you judge yourself to currently be a "harem porn writer").. no fame for the AVN author outside of the AVN community. everyone wants their 15mins.
good luck trying to convert your plot, minus all the meat, into an extremely oversaturated medium and not get lost in the ocean of highly skilled competitors, and i mean it sincerely, good luck to you. meanwhile, i'll be here lamenting over the loss of what was shaping up to become the next #1 AVN and might become the next #56874365 paperback novel, if you put in a lot of effort