Promising premise. I'm interested to see where it leads. There are some spelling and grammar errors. The game's description and the opening sentence have misspellings. I wouldn't want that to deter readers from all the good work you've done.
Thanks for the heads up, I thought I'd combed through this thoroughly for spelling errors but I definitely fond a few in this last round of editing. My fault for doing most of my writing on the notes app in my phone 😂
