Hi.
Just wanted to say that I'm feeling terrible after playing this game... because I only found out about it in a completely random way! It's awesome! Simple and somewhat basic, true, but it's still awesome, as the characters and stories of each are so relatable and personal and, ugh, there were so many times I just wanted to copycat Lori and just go all kawaii over June! She's so adorably cute, when I got to the end of her playthrough I was so wanting to actually know how to draw so I could make a sexy butterfly with her face coming out of the cocoon or something!
And Emma's story is, unfortunately, all too real, and one of the paths although can be interpreted as cruel but still fair. Fair'ish. So long as Landon's really a good guy and not a Doctor Hannibal, ya know what I mean? But, still, despite feeling bad for Henry, it were his mistakes that got them in that situation. Ok, in real life, I'd advise Emma to really think carefully and decide whether or not he deserves a last chance on waking up and actually owning up to his blunders, but that's just part of the thing with videogames, the player can actually go forth without fear because, worst case scenario? Reload, lol.
Annie's actually felt a bit impersonal for the male protag, but I'm likely reading it wrong as I've never been fond of playing dom myself. Or maybe I'm missing something with Annie, because she seemed a bit too... 2D'ish? Not blank, but close? IDK, but of the four, hers was the one that meant the less, though I still enjoyed it, sure.
Mai's... No spoilers, please, but I really really hope just for the giggles that one of the possible endings can be a triangle with the player and Mai and Clara with no secrets. Not sure (like, at all!) if Clara would go to sharing the player with Mai due to their own friendship (don't recall any particular mention of it, but I got the impression that Mai and Clara have been long-time friends), but I sure would be up to devoting time in figuring out the dialogues to get that ending.
So, in case it's not been made obvious, loved playing this game, really looking forward for the next updates. Just checked Steam, and couldn't find a game with this name so I'm guessing it's not there (yet?); please inform if it ever gets set up on the Steam store, I'll insta-follow and wishlist!
Which I just did here on itch, following and rated. Hope everything goes well, and that you'll have a great time developing this WIP into a full release!
Cheers!