Like others experienced, I was unable to install the original apk that was submitted for judging, so I'm unable to give it proper marks for rating.
I did play your newer version so I can give feedback on it!
The audio was good. I like the story telling that you built into the game. I REALLY appreciate a fade to black transition into a new scene. It makes it so much less jarring.
The scene in the woods did suffer some major framerate issues. I don't know if this is caused because your environment game objects aren't set to static, or if you just have so much foliage that it overwhelms the GPU/CPU.
The hands themselves didn't seem to align with the controllers. That's just a matter of adjusting the hands in play mode until they feel a little better in terms of controller alignment.
Overall, it's a great start! It looks like you tried to fit so much in during this jam. For future jams, I'd say scope it down a little bit, and also watch out for optimization. Lower framerates are a big trigger for motion sickness.
I hope you keep it up in these jams! I'm sorry your original build couldn't be installed, but these types of things happen to everyone during jams. Thank you again for joining and I hope to see you for the Halloween Jam!