I like the vibe of both tracks, and how you took multiple approaches to this theme - which I think is totally appropriate, given the theme.
Constructive feedback:
On the second track especially, I feel like the spatial elements are still overlapping in a way that is generating just a bit of murkiness. There are a lot of professional level tracks that have this level of murkiness, so it's not a major problem, but I've personally been finding out that one of the best ways to achieve a clean sound is to really just make sure that things are well placed in the space.
The absolute biggest lesson I learned this jam was simply to have two different reverb busses (rather than 1), a single track for each reverb, with each track linking to those reverbs. As soon as I split those reverbs, my sound quality difference was insane.
It allowed me to have a big, lush sound that is also clean and not murky. So, my setup was Neoverb, which is my favorite "clean realistic" style reverb, and then I had Valhalla supermassive in the background. I tweaked how much of each track was sent to each reverb as well.
I'd have to see your mix to troubleshoot completely, but this was just one of the biggest things I discovered this jam and I wanted to share it. I feel like that kind of application would open your tracks up more so they have more of that ultra-clean polished sound to them.
Again, great work overall, the vibe definitely was right on the money. :)