This isn't a dialogue suggestion, but it is something that would have helped me regarding turn 27. I hope it isn't too presumptuous to write my thoughts here.
Vs lbh trg lbhe fpvrapr hc gbb rneyl orsber qbvat nal bs gur guvatf gung jbhyq znxr Mbenan fhfcvpvbhf bs gur pvephzfgnaprf ertneqvat ure qnq'f qrngu, lbh bayl trg guerr bcgvbaf (zheqre/fhvpvqr/nppvqrag), ohg gurer vf ab purpx be grfg fvtavslvat gurer vf n sbhegu bcgvba ninvynoyr. V fcrag n ybg bs gvzr va rneyl cynlguebhtuf gelvat gb vairfgvtngr jung jnf tbvat ba, naq V arire ernyvfrq V jnf snvyvat zl eha ng guvf cneg bs gur fgbel. V xrcg cynlvat hagvy ghea 27, guvaxvat V jnf zvffvat fbzr fbeg bs purpx ng gur bcren. Vs vg jrer cbffvoyr sbe fbzr fbeg bs purpx gb nccrne urer (fvzvyne gb YYGD'f grfg sbe jne be grfg sbe pehrygl) V guvax vg jbhyq ernyyl uryc cynlref gel bgure zrgubqf, orsber gheavat gb fcbvyref. Gung orvat fnvq, juvyfg V ybir YYGD, V eryvrq ba frireny thvqrf orsber V jnf noyr gb pbzcyrgr gur tnzr jvgubhg qlvat, fb znlor guvf vf zber bs n crefbany ceboyrz.