while i agree with you about the grammar not being the best or polished, (i dont really mind, i get the gist and love the rest of the game) sadly even if they fixed it they cannot sell this game on steam because it's made in honeyselect. any HS games cannot be sold because it's someone else's game that these novels are made in. they can only take donations, so it cannot be put on steam at all. that's why all honeyselect games on itch are free