great idea, visual a little choppy but great never the less. the translation (I assume wasn't writing in English but translated by a tool, so yes plenty of grammar mistakes but still understand the idea. you should try to polish the writing and the graphic a little and put on sale on steam.
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while i agree with you about the grammar not being the best or polished, (i dont really mind, i get the gist and love the rest of the game) sadly even if they fixed it they cannot sell this game on steam because it's made in honeyselect. any HS games cannot be sold because it's someone else's game that these novels are made in. they can only take donations, so it cannot be put on steam at all. that's why all honeyselect games on itch are free