Phew. I was actually kinda dreading your reply because I knew my comment must have come off as extremely harsh to hear. You obviously put a lot of time into this project and, although I said everything with the intention of helping, I didn't say much in the way of praise. Thank you for taking my criticisms well. I probably wont pick the game back up, but if you ever make another writing project I'll tune in to see your developments as a writer.
My most important advice: Keep having fun making whatever the hell you want !! >:) godspeed