1. mew
1a. there's an extra it on the final line between her 6th and 7th set of dialog during sex
1b. Caught, line right after prof. Maple's first dialog, you is missing
2. arti
2a. Right before exploration 2nd to last sentence, the missing before the word seafoam
2b. Caught, sentance right after prof. Maple's first dialog, the is missing between the 2 lines
3. Zapdos
3a. Before exploration maple's first dialog final line, is there supposed to be an "a" there?
3b. Before exploration, the first line after maple's first dialog first the is supposed to be "to"
3c. Same as 1b exept its a "the"
4. Moltres
4a. Question 3 extra the in the last line
5. Kanto girls
5a. Daisy last dialog before her photo first line 2nd "is" should be it
5b. Daisy first sentence after you show her mew second line should be "at" between "look" and "each-other"
5c. Daisy 2nd to last dialog before 2nd photo first line "by" should be "my"
5d. Daisy line before 3rd mew line after 2nd daisy photo keep is missing an "s" at the end
5e. Line right before last lorelei photo "do" should be "to"
5f. First line of misty's second dialog after show her mewtwo hear is missing a "d" at the end for heard
5g. Sabrina 5th dialog last sentence: There's a "to" missing between it and disturb
5h. Sabrina first line of the paragraph right before final zapdos dialog before final Sabrina photo the "r" for her is missing between as and struggles
5i. Sabrina 6th to last line before final photo the she at the end shouldnt be there
5j. Erika first line between her 2nd and third dialog few has an extra "f"
5k. Erika 2nd line 2nd dialog after 2nd photo that between even and watching should be than
5l. Erika 2nd to last line between her 3rd and 4th dialog after 2nd photo, the "c" in once shouldn't be there
5m. Erika first line between her 5th and 6th dialog after 2nd photo the second "s" in she's should be a "d"
5n. Erika 3rd line between her 7th and 8th dialog after 2nd photo a "y" is missing for they between as and slip
Also I decided to do the numbering a bit differently