Really immersive track ! Great sound design, and I love the desolate / defeated mood. The stones sound helps picturing the ice blocks and irregular terrain, overall I really feel like I'm wandering in an ice desert when I listen to this. Very meditative.
If I can add something, I'd say the composition's a bit janky at times, lacks a sense of momentum. Chord progression often feel unresolved and the track stays still while it could tell a story with the base you set.
I said "Aww man !" to myself when it was the end, feels like it ends too soon. The track could really use some progression !
Overall great track, love the ideas but I think you could think more about what story the track tells.
Cheers from a fellow french speaking composer !