The VN dialogue system is great. I think paired with some voice acting, timed animations (I saw you had some) it will be super slick. Like Ian said already, I wish there was more interaction to hold my interest during the story bits. VN inherently lack interaction save for some dialogue choices but there were no dialogue choices and since this is VR as a player I want to interact with something more than just advancing the story.I think all the pieces are in place you just need a little bit more interaction and you have a framework to build a dope game about anything you want.