Very well put together and a great dialogue system :)
It had a great atmosphere and the story is engaging and enjoyable to go through.
I would've liked some interaction in there too though, after a while it became a little too 'non-interactive' and even though the story, characters and environment were great, it just didn't hold my interest over the long-term. It would've been great if there was some interactive parts and variation to bring more life into it.
Like Beard, it just went black and I wasn't sure if that was the end or not.
Overall, a nice chill experience, with some great environments and characters in it - great job :)