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Thank you for playing and the VOD! I apologize as I haven't gotten around to watching any as I am still preparing for an upcoming exam atm... T_T

Perhaps I should add a transition image when the POV changes..? Hm... I did wish I didn't have to introduce so many characters so early on, but I think with the amount of events planned for the story it was rather hard to avoid. There's still 3 characters yet to be seen ^^; but you'll see them again and again, and I "hope" players will naturally remember them over time with new events. *fingers crossed*

It seems you and the other streamer both missed the mouse becoming cross hairs and letting you pick to shoot at the butt section, or the actual 3 targets. I'll need to watch both your VODs to understand why. Perhaps I need to give more obvious hint and a more obvious design change. Oddly enough, I was told to add this feature by teammates to make it more immersive, but it seems players instead see a choice disappeared versus it presenting itself differently lol.

I'll need to figure out how to change the opening. The text has actually been trimmed and slowed down from previously... And the way the text works, it doesn't allow players to click through as the scenes and text is timed with the song. I may need to ask the composer to do an opening song tweak to allow more reading time.

I highly appreciate the thorough breakdown and will see what additional polish I can consider ^_^ thank you for the wishlist!

Hello again! I've finally got to watch your VOD. I really enjoyed the voices you did. It makes me wish I could afford adding voicework to the game T_T it makes the scenes a bit more comical and lively. I also noticed you missed the opportunity to click every glossary term that came up in yellow font in the dialogue box. Perhaps I need a better way to tell players it's available... especially "Eden's curse" being really comical in the glossary.

You did a rather amazing job guessing at the pickpocket scene! You had the right idea but removed it at times. But I am definitely okay with players failing that mini-game since that is what Robin wants to happen. I can't wait for the designer to make a better UI for the scene.

The choice scene at the archery was aiming the crosshair mouse anywhere in the butt area "What is adventure without risk?" and any of the 3 target wreaths as "All or nothing," I'm definitely a bit stuck on how to clue players onto the first bit being an actual choice... It wasn't a problem when it was just boxed choices to pick from with the same text.

Thanks again for the thorough critique (: I hope the rest of the game will meet your expectations.